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EDIT: i have fixed her wings.
so this i think will be final then. i want to do a better job with the background, but i need a lot more practice, so i'll leave it and do more fan art. ++++ I have been wanting to paint Carnival again since i made the first fan art of her, only i wanted it to be bigger and more detailed. and i finally did ^__^ i hope by now i dont need to explain who she is or what book she is from. if you dont yet know, shame. go out now and find the book called Scar Night by Alan Campbell and read it. so far i think i'm done with this picture, but i might come back to it, and fix it up a bit latter. i dont know, tell me what you think of it. reff pose by *mjranum-stock [link] Comments
This is really nice!
Though, I have a few thoughts on it.. Something about the back wing bugs me. I'm not sure but it just seems positioned wrong. I think it needs to be alittle more to the left and down. Also, where is her right arm? I think it would be a good idea to draw it loosely floating behind her just flowing by her her flight. But overall this is great! (though I'm lame and have no idea who she is) -- "I'm your biggest fan, I'll follow you until you love me, papa-paparazzi" argh! your right the wing is very off. thanks. its hard to see when i'v been starring at this all day.
and i'm torn between the arm, at one time i want it in, at other i dont... i shall have to think on that. ah! dont be lame Well I may just give that a try then, the next time I have some shopping time and money together, I may just give it a read. ^^
You're quite welcome =3 And the arm thing is totally up to you, I just was thinking if I were the one flying as she is, I know mine would be extended behind me, like the other. -- "I'm your biggest fan, I'll follow you until you love me, papa-paparazzi" i hope you do, and then tell me if you liked it or not? i should like to hear what you think of it.
see i try to use only one reff photo as much as possible, because when more then one is mix in for the pose, things go wrong. i feel a bit like Frankenstein at times like that This makes me want a tablet REALLY bad. I hope you realize you're making me really bummed out that I don't have one and therefore can't do really bitchin' backgrounds like this one.
You're killing me, smalls. -- -------------------------- Hey Guys------------------------ I'm always up for a nice art trade. Who's down? |
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